My writing sample

I walk through the park I hear the light breeze come upon me like a little bird cheeping its  favorite song in the morning,  I look at the leaves and see them drop down they looks like little pebbles just falling off a little branch.The young boy is wearing a bright dark orange t-shirt like a juicy yummy orange. And  I also see his brand new dark blue converse. The young boys father is wearing a darkie light  blue t-shirt and a fading  pair of jeans. I could hear the bench crackling and the others with no one but the wind. It sounds like a ghost whispering a deep secret to someone special.My dad and I had a discussion about what i'm going to do in the future.

He was going on and on about what i’m going to do in the future he said “son what inspires you the most he asked” “umm I do love soccer and I would  also like  to be a famous soccer player when I grow up” okay soccer is fine “yeah” it will feel great hearing the crowd  cheering for my team “yeah that will be awesome” so if you were in a team what will you name it? “Hmmm i’ll call it the miners” i’ll be so proud of you if you make…………..team?

“You will need to practice soccer everyday to get better and better and also go to international soccer tournaments”  I wonder how fathers and son get along so quickly.    

 

Esio trot

This book Esio trot is about a man who owns a tortoise named Esio trot who is so tiny but his owner tells him to gain more weight so then the owner feed his tortoise more and more lettuce so that his tortoise gets bigger,bigger and bigger.My favorite part is when his owner sends a letter which does not make sense but he told the ladies its spelled backwards.  And also did you know that if you spell tortoise backwards it spells Esio trot. I recommend this for children ages 7-10.

My diary

My diary

#30 December 2018

Dear diary its me again, today's my birthday and  i just turned 14 i’m wondering what i’m going to get but i don’t really want anything that much  hope i get something!

Gloria

December 31st 2018

Dear diary, today's my sisters birthday i hate it when my brother or sister has a birthday on your own birthday or on the next day because they might have a bigger birthday party then me.

Gloria

My Matariki

MATARIKI!

“Hahahaha that was funny uncle Tony”I say. As we finished our dinner of fish and chips we begin a midnight walk on the beach. As I turned my back I see that the fire has already been lit. The fire is so warm  I don't feel like moving at all. It is so comfortable I don't want to leave. I look up in the sky the stars, are glimmering as if they are a golden treasure. When I looked again I shouted “there they are the seven stars”

By faye letrina taunuu

My Writing sample

As I walk along the  beach I see two young boys building a sandcastle. I could hear the wave of the beach roaring like a tiger every second when it needs something. And when the waves come back and forward its  like a tsunami  is about to hit as it starts to get bigger and bigger. The two little children are building a palace and I imagine  that I was right in the palace with lights made out of sand and the walls,carpets. As the boys feet touch the soft sand it looks like soft melting sugar ready to be glazed on a dessert.

As I look at the sand the sharp shells it looks  like pencils poking you every 1 second. I could hear the families playing at the back and having a time of their  life. So the two little boys decided to make a bigger sand castle as one of the boys turned around to get some sand the middle of the suns core catched my eyes and I can not bear to look at it any more.  When I look upon the sky I can see the thick clouds trying to cover the sun because it shining so bright like the sun shining on a mirror and all I hear seagulls  yelling for their  food.  

The Thea sisters and the Blue Scarab Hunt Book Review

The Thea sisters had to try to find the treasure which is called the treasure of the sun. As the Thea sisters were talking a woman named Dunya over heard the sisters talking about the treasure and asked if they needed help to find it. She really wanted the treasure to herself. My favourite part in the book was when Dunya tried to trick the Thea sisters.  I recommend this book for students who are ages 8-10 years.