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Thursday, 4 September 2014

My Writing sample

As I walk along the  beach I see two young boys building a sandcastle. I could hear the wave of the beach roaring like a tiger every second when it needs something. And when the waves come back and forward its  like a tsunami  is about to hit as it starts to get bigger and bigger. The two little children are building a palace and I imagine  that I was right in the palace with lights made out of sand and the walls,carpets. As the boys feet touch the soft sand it looks like soft melting sugar ready to be glazed on a dessert.


As I look at the sand the sharp shells it looks  like pencils poking you every 1 second. I could hear the families playing at the back and having a time of their  life. So the two little boys decided to make a bigger sand castle as one of the boys turned around to get some sand the middle of the suns core catched my eyes and I can not bear to look at it any more.  When I look upon the sky I can see the thick clouds trying to cover the sun because it shining so bright like the sun shining on a mirror and all I hear seagulls  yelling for their  food.  








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